I changed my notes to  this scene card quite a bit before writing this scene only twice before putting it into my rough draft. 

I guess that is progress.  I went back, after writing some character journals for Is. (he hates being called that) and Martin/Meir, once I had a better idea of their relationship.  A bit like the Mentor in the Hero’s Journey, but not quite.  Updating this scene card several times made it a mess, but helped, when drafting the preliminary scene.

Shira

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